Monday, March 10, 2008

AWOL'd : Chapter One REDUX

It's been a long while since my last blog. I've been pretty busy working on AWOL'd and recently completed Chapters 01-02 for the graphic novel.
Here are pages 6-8 of Chapter O1. If you happen to own the first draft/print of AWOL'd issue 1, hold it up and compare those pages with these. There is an improvement.



4 comments:

Evan said...

This is fantastic work. So moody (and gory -- ick). The facial expressions on the second page are amazing, Loo.

tyrone said...

Loo ... I dig ...
Love the feel you get with the blacks and whites ... and grays ...
If you ever colour these pages I can see you using muted colours ... just to keep it similar to the B&W version ...

AlanaMcCarthy said...

It's awesome, totally looks like a movie. That was some good advice that you got.

ADC said...

yay, gore!
good pacing. I like the use of spot black shadows to illustrate the blast from the explosion.

have you test printed any of these pages? I'm interested to see if the use of tone isn't overwhelming. As there is almost not open white spaces...