Friday, June 15, 2007

the page before

Again some pre-inked work(page 2). Things to note: the last 3 panels have the same image of the hole in the door pasted on over each panel. Also there will be a lot of sound words added.

6 comments:

AlanaMcCarthy said...

AH, guess it helps to have the page before. Makes more sense now that you see how the hole got there, and the picture on the wall.
Good stuff.

-loo-bot- said...

Totally. It answers the location of the painting. Interesting shape/details to the guy's face. Make sure your penciling takes less-to-equal space on a page compared to your inking, I stress this after looking around the areas of his right eye in the last panel.
Nice perspective on the fourth panel.

tyrone said...

Great story telling on this page ...
Love to see this inked ... or coloured ...

Zen said...

Nice. Thanks for the added context.
INK IT NOW!

Evan said...

Some really stellar storytelling. A really great flow to the page. I just hope the areas of dark don't make the page too murky. I guess we'll see with the inking. Nice work!

J.S. Kociuba said...

This is a new phase in me learning to do a comic. I will have all of you in my thoughts while I ink this sucker.

Do you think the holes in the last 3 panels should be lined up?